Tuesday, October 19, 2010

Dear John, an inspiration!

they made love in the rain
raindrops pattered off their bare skins
that blended with the brown of the wooden structure
that did not shelter them from the shower
and it wasn't as though they cared
it was just a sweet rain
a sweet rain that culminated
in a wave of tremor that shook their engaged bodies
from underneath the skin!
and then she gasped:
“make me a promise, tell me you will come back to me”
“I promise”
he gasped!


(so this was inspired by the movie Dear John)

2 comments:

Ghana_Hall_of_Shame said...

That's tight!
Loved Dear John. Saw Letters to Juliet a few weeks after. Yep. Movies that can make a grown man cry.
Mike

Nana Fredua-Agyeman said...

and it is a beautiful piece. Saying a lot with such few words.